some people feel that good health is very important to every people, so medical service should not be run by profit making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages

Health

care

is always one of the most critical aspects of

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life.

Therefore

, it is thought by a number of people that

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provision should not be operated by

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sector. Personally, I disagree with that opinion and think that the benefits of private

health

care

do outweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand, there are certain disadvantages that

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hospitals bring about regarding high treatment costs

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and potential ethical and legal corruption. In terms of the former, since

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care

institutions owned privately have little dependence on the national budget, their incomes come mostly from

patients

’ charges.

This

would increase the costs of medical treatment, and make

health

care

less accessible for low-wage people or even

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class. Turning to the latter, private

health

care

is somewhat profit-oriented so doctors may treat their

patients

unethically and even illegally to earn more money. Some of the common ways are requiring more medical tests than necessary, or prescribing expensive medicines

instead

of cheaper and quality substitutes. Despite the aforementioned downside, there are numerous positives that private

health

care

brings for

patients

, medical staff and governments.

First,

since private medical establishments are not limited by

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budget, there is more access to advanced treatment and modern technology.

Patients

also

have greater choices in medical services.

Second,

doctors and other medical staff would be in more favourable working conditions with less pressure of too many

patients

and higher salaries

as well as

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.

Last

but not least,

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health

care

services have the difficulty of rising demand but limited willingness to increase taxes to pay for it. The private sector could fill

this

gap by operating independently from the national budget, reducing public spending on

health

care

and earning more taxes for governments from profit-making medical firms. In conclusion, private

health

care

introduces both pros and cons.

However

, I am convinced that the advantages are more essential than the disadvantages regarding benefits for

patients

, medical employees and national authorities.