The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
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The bar graph provides information about married
men
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and married
women
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unpaid done throughout the week
such
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as household chores, and taking care of their family.
Overall
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, the highest work was done by married
women
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with 3
children
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and it increased
while
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married
men
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remained constant. All three families experienced fluctuation in working
hours
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. As per the bar chart,
women
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without
children
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was having house chore and other activities and they were able to save some of their
hours
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and was 30. Once they have
children
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is significant growth in work
hours
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they have to provide time for childcare and reach around 51.
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,the highest time spent by the married
women
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with 3
children
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was 60 and outweighed by the other two families. In comparison, of married
women
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, married
men
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spent fewer
hours
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in household work around 19 and showed no fluctuation and remained steady. followed by the married
men
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with one child and with 3children.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, children, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • demographics
  • household responsibilities
  • societal expectations
  • norms
  • childcare
  • housework
  • gardening
  • contributions
  • family structure
  • cultural implications
  • social implications
  • work-life balance
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