The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts depict information about the percentage of
sales
done via online mode for different Use synonyms
sectors
in New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013. Use synonyms
Overall
, the majority of the Linking Words
sales
happened in the travel sector in 2003 Use synonyms
while
after a decade, it was in the film/music sector.
Linking Words
To begin
with, 36% of total online Linking Words
sales
in 2003 Use synonyms
was
from the travelling Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Use synonyms
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
However
, these Linking Words
sectors
' Use synonyms
sales
were reduced by 7% in the next ten years. Use synonyms
The
similar trend was seen in clothing Correct article usage
A
sales
which contributed 24% in 2003 Use synonyms
whereas
the figure decreased to 16% in the final year of the period considered.
It is evident that film/music Linking Words
sectors
' Use synonyms
sales
accounted for 21% in the initial year and increased to 33% in 2013 to become the most prominent sector in that year. Use synonyms
Additionally
,Linking Words
sales
of books Use synonyms
also
showed Linking Words
a
same fashion of an increment in 10 years but the value of Correct article usage
the
increment
was feeble at about 3%.Correct article usage
the increment
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