The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts depict information about the percentage of
sales
done via online mode for different sectors
in New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013. Overall
, the majority of the sales
happened in the travel sector in 2003 while
after a decade, it was in the film/music sector.
To begin
with, 36% of total online sales
in 2003 was
from the travelling Correct subject-verb agreement
were
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
However
, these sectors
' sales
were reduced by 7% in the next ten years. The
similar trend was seen in clothing Correct article usage
A
sales
which contributed 24% in 2003 whereas
the figure decreased to 16% in the final year of the period considered.
It is evident that film/music sectors
' sales
accounted for 21% in the initial year and increased to 33% in 2013 to become the most prominent sector in that year. Additionally
,sales
of books also
showed a
same fashion of an increment in 10 years but the value of Correct article usage
the
increment
was feeble at about 3%.Correct article usage
the increment
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