The diagrams show the structure of a solar panel and its use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams show the structure of a solar panel and its use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The process illustrates the usage of the solar panel system to generate warm
air
and warm
water
.
Overall
, there are two primary functions of
this
system, beginning with consuming sunlight and ending with creating warm
air
and
water
. In the first stage of the process, transparent glass needs to be set up in a square shape with two outputs: an inlet and an outlet. After that, by being exposed to the high temperature of sunlight combined with a hole, which tracks a certain amount of fresh
air
into the object, it is in an ideal condition to generate a quantity of warm
air
beneath the glass layer.
Following
this
, the warm
air
is guided through a black pipe for release outside. In the next function of the solar panel system, for
water
, some adjustments are necessary inside the box.
Instead
of an empty box, the output and input have to be connected with a pipe.
Then
, the pure liquid is exposed to high temperatures to generate warm
water
.
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