Nowadays, some products are being sold by famous brands and
companies
.
This
could
becauseAdd a missing verb
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of the
power
of
on
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peoples'Change noun form
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decisions which would force them to purchase some
goods
, which are unnecessary for them in
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society
. I
with
this
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and I think we live in a community,
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every oneReplace the word
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just
thinkChange the verb form
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about their benefits.
Huge businesses and big
companies
invest a
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amount of their budget on advertisement, so
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biggest parts of their sales
isChange the verb form
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because of that.
Firstly
, we see numerous billboards whole of our city, in some public places and even high
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, which they advertise
goods
and facilities.
This
showChange the verb form
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the
power
of advertising to make our minds busy with
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products. In order to do that, the rate of sales would be grown in that specific
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.
Secondly
, adolescents and students are looking for new
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and they would be affected by their
favoriteChange the spelling
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celebrities sooner
thatCorrect word choice
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adults. Providing that they see an advertisement
betweenChange preposition
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their
favoriteChange the spelling
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TV-showCorrect your spelling
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or on their social media page, which
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that their beloved actor,actress or football player advertises a new video game or even a piece of
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, they
affect by that and they would ask their parent to provide that product, even if it is not crucial.
Furthermore
, In my opinion, the governments should fund some
companies
' advertisements which their
goods
are new for both
society
and individuals. Because of the
power
of global and
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businesses, some local start-ups which they try their best to implement fashionable and modern
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would
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.
For instance
, we have numerous start-ups run by new-graduated university students and they have
varietyAdd an article
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of products
such
as new technologies,
gadgets or even new electrical
for home
. If the government does not
them
to introduceChange preposition
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their
goods
, they might
looseReplace the word
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their motivation, which
inCorrect your spelling
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for both
society
and local communities.
In conclusion, because of the
advertisementReplace the word
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power
of some big and global
companies
, the new start-ups would be damaged in
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society
and people might purchase some facilities which they do not play an
role in their lives
as well as
society
.