The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.
The above bar chart presents the percentage of owned and rented homes in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It is clearly can be seen that the comparison shows an opposite tendency and the turning point is 1971. Before 1971,
although
the difference was always getting closer, rented live space outweighed the owned.
In contrast
, after 1971 when the stands for both living choices equalized, the bought accommodation was always higher than the temporary.
To begin
with, the owned and rented properties started at 18% and 22% respectively.
Furthermore
, with more and more people choosing to buy a place
instead
of renting, the percentage of both living styles reached the same point which was 50% in 1971.
On the other hand
, the owned and rented properties changed to 69% and 31% in 2001 from 6% and 40% in 1961.
However
, the increase in owned accommodation stopped in 2001 and dropped to 62% in 2011. Meanwhile, the rented accommodation grew to 37% in 20011 in the end.
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  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
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  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
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