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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table illustrates the
population
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 of four different
countries
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 in which Argentina, Indonesia, Italy and Korea are included. In
this
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 table, data is provided in 3 timelines i.e. for the year 2003 and the projected
population
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 for 2025 and 2050.
To begin
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 with, Indonesia had the largest
population
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 among the 4
countries
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such
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 as 238
million
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 in 2003
whereas
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 Argentina had the least
population
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 of 34
million
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 in 2003. Italy and Korea had a
population
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 of 54
million
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 and 48
million
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.
Furthermore
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, the projected
population
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 of the four
countries
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 in 2025 depicts that all four
countries
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 are not controlling their
population
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. Indonesia already had a 238
million
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population
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 but ,
still
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 they have no control over it and it is estimated that it will reach 274
million
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 people. Other
countries
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'
population
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 is
also
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 increasing with the passage of time.
In addition
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, the projected figure of
population
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 in 2050 indicates that the Indonesian
population
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 will be 312
million
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, Italy's
population
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 will decrease to 45
million
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, and Argentina will have 62
million
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population
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 but there will be no change in the Korean
population
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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