The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table illustrates the
population
of four different
countries
in which Argentina, Indonesia, Italy and Korea are included. In
this
table, data is provided in 3 timelines i.e. for the year 2003 and the projected
population
for 2025 and 2050.
To begin
with, Indonesia had the largest
population
among the 4
countries
such
as 238
million
in 2003
whereas
Argentina had the least
population
of 34
million
in 2003. Italy and Korea had a
population
of 54
million
and 48
million
.
Furthermore
, the projected
population
of the four
countries
in 2025 depicts that all four
countries
are not controlling their
population
. Indonesia already had a 238
million
population
but ,
still
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they have no control over it and it is estimated that it will reach 274
million
people. Other
countries
'
population
is
also
increasing with the passage of time.
In addition
, the projected figure of
population
in 2050 indicates that the Indonesian
population
will be 312
million
, Italy's
population
will decrease to 45
million
, and Argentina will have 62
million
population
but there will be no change in the Korean
population
.
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