You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter, ● ask what types of membership are available and what the prices are ● ask what activities are available ● and ask what the joining procedure is
Dear Sir or Madam
I am asking the manager to join the sports field opened in your
neighborhood
.
I want to see what kind of equipment the new sports field is made of. I want to get acquainted with the conditions there. The purpose of my neighbourhood is to make friends there.
My goal is to achieve many achievements in the sport I am a member of. I want my parents to be proud of my achievements.
Faithfully, MehrinisoChange the spelling
neighbourhood
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task achievement
Make sure to directly answer all questions listed in the task. Include specific inquiries about membership types, prices, activities, and the joining procedure.
coherence cohesion
Work on developing a clear logical structure by organizing your paragraphs around different questions from the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Consider using specific paragraphs to address each question in the prompt for better clarity and organization.
general positive
Your greeting and sign-off are polite and suitable for a formal letter.
general positive
You display an eagerness to engage with the gym and its community, which sets a positive tone for your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite