Government investment in the art,such as music and theater is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree

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It has been stated that investing
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art
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the art
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industry
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performance
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and
music
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would be
unnecssary
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unnecessary
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waste the
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's budget, so the state must spend money on more critical public services. Personally, I completely disagree with
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statement. I think that
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, theatre and painting are the vital subjects that the
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should fund
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.
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, individuals can express their ideas and feelings through the
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they play or the
performance
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performances
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they do. These kinds of arts are counted as a way of communication because of the feeling and the sense of empathy that a performer would implement
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our heart.
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, some children and adolescents have significant talents
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art works
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artworks
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. If
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schools and academic places recognise these talents, students can improve them and
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be
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successful and famous
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people
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in the future. There are numerous job opportunities for talented artists and there are
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a variety
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of companies which they not only fund and motivate artists
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but
also
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undoubtedly support them
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their
carrier
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careers
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.
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, some individuals believe that there are more important categories,
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the
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can invest them.
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, In my opinion,
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and theatre are the subjects that
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are as valuable as other
criterias
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criteria
because these kinds of
arts
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art
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help
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society to protect its cultural
herritage
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heritage
and history and
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pass
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it through next generation and even other countries.
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, in the case of
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, the player and singer can play or sing the
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which
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to their country. In order to do that, foreigners and younger generations would be more familiar with the
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and historical values.
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, the money which is spent
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the concerts and the performance of famous celebrities can bring back
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huge percentage of
budget
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that had been
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funded
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by the
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. In conclusion, I argue that spending money
in
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the
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art
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, especially theatre and
music
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would not be a waste.
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