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industry
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waste the
's budget, so the state must spend money on more critical public services. Personally, I completely disagree with
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I think that
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.
, individuals can express their ideas and feelings through the
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they do. These kinds of arts are counted as a way of communication because of the feeling and the sense of empathy that a performer would implement
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schools and academic places recognise these talents, students can improve them and
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in the future. There are numerous job opportunities for talented artists and there are
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of companies which they not only fund and motivate artists
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but
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, some individuals believe that there are more important categories,
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can invest them.
, In my opinion,
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are as valuable as other
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society to protect its cultural
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it through next generation and even other countries.
, in the case of
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to their country. In order to do that, foreigners and younger generations would be more familiar with the
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and historical values.
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.
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, especially theatre and
would not be a waste.