The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The graph gives information about how many per cent of international students graduated from universities in several Canadian regions between 2001 and 2006.
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, by 2001, the percentage of international students graduating based on several areas in Canada had increased significantly, except for Alberta province, which was decreasing for the next 5 years. From 2001, New Brunswick had the highest number of overseas students than other areas at around 7 %. It was followed by Nova Scotia with over 6 %. In 2006, universities in British Columbia shared the second highest number; it has increased two-fold from roughly 5%.
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, there was a slight difference with Nova Scotia at over 10 %. By 2006, the percentage of Alberta province had decreased from 6 % to 4%
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universities from Ontario had climbed to 6 % from 4 %. Manitoba experienced the same points as Newfoundland and Labrador from 4 % to 7%.
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, only the province of Alberta had tailed off whilst other areas rocketed by 2 or 4 points.
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