The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart illustrates the proportion of the estimated literacy by region and gender for 4 years, starting in 2000
overall
the percentage of total in Europe was the highest with 93.6% while
in Africa was the lowest with only 62.5%
to begin
there was 87.2% male and 77.3% female literacy worldwide, while
the rate in America was 94.1% and 93.2%. Africa accounted for 71.6% of males and 53.9% of females studied, while
Asia made up a significantly higher fraction of 85.9% of males and 72.5% of females. And finally
, the percentage of Oceania were 94.2% male and 92.7% female, which was very close to Europe when it had 99.2% males and 98.5% female estimated literacySubmitted by trung642k6 on
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