You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter: •say which part-time course you booked •explain why you need to cancel your booking •ask about booking a different course You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam..........,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
regarding the cancellation of the part-time stock market
course
, which is starting from coming Friday. I am Jaskaran Singh Awal, and my candidate number is 12345.
Last
week, I booked a stock market
course
through the college’s website.
Further
, I paid the full fee of $300.00 through my credit card including 18 per cent tax.
Due to
some unforeseen circumstances, I need to cancel the
course
because I will not be in New Delhi for the next 2 weeks.
Therefore
, I request you to cancel my registration for
this
part-time
course
and provide a refund for the full amount.
However
, I would like to do a full-time portfolio management
course
at your college once I am back in the city.
Hence
, could you please provide the details about the
course
which would start after 2 weeks with the total fees? Awaiting your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Jaskaran Singh Awal
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