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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture gives information about the process of recycling glass
bottles
.
Overall
,
this
 process has three main stages
from
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collecting the
bottles
 and
recycle
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recycling
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 them to
sell
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selling
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 new manufactured
bottles
 to supermarkets for re-using by customers. In the first step, the glass
bottles
 are collected and transported to some special factories for reconstruction. After that, they
put
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 under
the
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high-pressure water to
divid
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divide
divided
 into three categories
consist
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 of brown, green and white wastes.
After
this
 procedure, the dividing glasses are
careed
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carried
 by
the
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special trucks to the glass factories in order to break into small pieces. For manufacturing new
bottles
, these glasses should be burnt in the high
temprature
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temperature
, approximately 600 to 8800
centigerad
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centigrade
. After combining new and
recycles
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recycled
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 melted glasses, they put on some
preparred
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prepared
moudles
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modules
. in the final step, the
new
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 constructed products would be sent to Tesco
supermarket
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supermarkets
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 for selling
them
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to customers.
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