Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children spend watching TV influences their behavious. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era of gadgets, A

television

is a common item in every household. It is a common topic of debate that what programme

children

watch

affect

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their

behaviour

or it is the time spent watching.

This

essay will discuss both views with my opinion. These days,

children

are more than capable of turning on the

television

without adult supervision, giving them access to

the

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programs which are not meant for

children

's eyes

hence

, they can misinterpret the information they have gained.

For instance

- a

child

with full control of the T.V. watches extreme violence like murder movies that can affect the viewpoint of

juvenile's

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the juvenile's

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mind, making violence normal for him.

thus

, making him violent or becoming a bully among his peers. In my opinion, it is rarely the case that a

child

would become violent just because he watched a movie, it might be a short-term issue but with time and

guidance

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it could be controlled without long-term

behaviour

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behavioural

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effects.

To begin

with, parents who are often busy let their offspring watch

television

for hours.

Due to

this

children

often do not pay attention to their studies and neglect their homework which can result in bad grades and careless

behaviour

from

child

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children

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.

In addition

, young ones often ignore playing outside with their friends as they are

addicted

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to

television

programs that they forget about the real world. All

this

can lead to a serious

behaviour

problem and can hinder the

overall

growth of the

child

. In my point of view, watching TV for too long can pose major problems as

children

have problems communicating effectively with their parents and friends because

reel

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real

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life and real life are two different worlds. To which a

child

can not differentiate.

To conclude

, it can seen clearly that

children

sometimes get influenced by what they see on TV but can be controlled with the right guidance,

similarly

, watching

television

can disturb a

child

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child's

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viewpoint.

hence

, both equally affect a

child

's

behaviour

and growth.