The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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Both charts give data regarding the comparison of household tasks done by
men
and women
as well as
how much time
they spend on them each day.
Overall
, both charts indicated that cooking and cleaning are more popular for women
to do, and the time
they spent was also
higher than men
's.
Initially
, based on the first chart, around 80% of women
usually cook every day and cleaning is slightly less, standing at over 60%, while
for men
, the percentage for these two tasks was lower than women
by about 20%. Change preposition
for women
Further
, the house repairs category had the least proportion at about 10% for women
and 20% for men
. Accounting for 20%, both genders had almost the same figure.
In terms of time
spending
, Replace the word
spent
women
do cooking and cleaning for approximately 80 and 60 minutes, respectively, while
men
spent
less Wrong verb form
spend
time
by
around 20% for each task. Pet care records Change preposition
apply
at
20% which was the same for Add a missing verb
were at
men
and women
, meanwhile, house repairs took the lowest amount of time
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