The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart provides data on the average
population
and
wealth
share
of eight different
regions
.
Overall
, the
share
of
wealth
is significantly higher in
regions
such
as North America and Europe compared to India and Africa. Meanwhile, China has the highest
population
of all eight
regions
; rich
Asia-Pacific
,
on the other hand
, has the lowest number of citizens in comparison to being the third highest in
wealth
share
. North America topped all other
regions
by around 34%
wealth
share
, followed by Europe and rich
Asia-Pacific
, ranging from about 23% to 29%, respectively.
Whereas
the other five
regions
have relatively similar portions to each other, Latin America and the Caribbean, with approximately 4% of the
wealth
share
, is the highest among them. Africa and India both came in
last
with roughly 2%, respectively. In terms of
population
, China leads with over 24%, despite having one of the lowest
wealth
shares at around 3%. Europe, India, and other
Asia-Pacific
were lower than China, whose proportions range from approximately 15% to 18% of the
population
. Meanwhile, none of the other four
regions
reached over 10%,
although
it is important to note that
rich
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Asia-pacific
Correct your spelling
Asia-Pacific
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has the lowest margin in
population
with about 5% as opposed to having one of the highest
wealth
shares.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, wealth, share, regions, asia-pacific with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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