the bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories

the bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories
The provided graphical representation sheds light on the distribution of expenditures into five different categories in the USA, Canada, UK and Japan in 2009.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • categories
  • percentage
  • bar chart
  • allocation
  • distribution
  • consumer spending
  • economic indicator
  • fiscal priorities
  • trend analysis
  • budget allocation
  • disposable income
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