The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.

The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.
The pie graphs provide information about the different cultural and leisure activities of boys and girls.
Overall
, computer games are the most preferred activity by boys,
whereas
dancing is preferred by girls. Listening to music,
on the other hand
, has equal support from both genders.
In contrast
, reading was the least favoured hobby by males but came in second on the girls' list. Computer games topped all other cultural and leisure activities for boys, with 34% of the total portion, followed by basketball at 26%, placing it second on the list. Soccer, skateboarding, listening to music, and reading are the activities that are on the males' list but were least favoured, which ranged from 2% to 17%, respectively. Meanwhile, females have dancing and reading lead the total fraction, with 27% and 21%, respectively.
In contrast
to the males' segment, only 16% of females play computer games,
whereas
in terms of listening to music, they have equally 10% of the total portion.
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