The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the ratio of world population and wealth in eight countries
such
as North
America
, Latin
America
and the Caribbean, Europe, Africa,
China
, India, Rich Asia-Pacifi and other
Asia-Pacific
.
Overall
, the most populated state is
China
in comparison to other nations and the richest people live in North
America
. As per the bar chart, the highest population on Earth comes from
China
about 24% and the second largest place is other
Asia-Pacific
around 17%.
Moreover
, India and Europe do have not much difference approximately 1%. The least contributed places
such
as North
America
, Latin
America
and Caribbean, Africa and Rich
Asia-Pacific
less than 10%.
Furthermore
, most of the wealthy communities come from North
America
almost 34% followed by Europe and Rich Asia- Pacific nearly 30% to 24%.
While
, another region has fewer wealthy people
such
as Latin
America
and the Caribbean, Africa,
China
, India and other
Asia-Pacific
lowest at 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, china, asia-pacific with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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