An increasing number of professional such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. what problem does this cause ? what can be done to deal with this situation ?
Everybody knows that people can not make everything where in the poorer
countries
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as which is needed to technology. That's why a lot of the public who are white-collar workers want to live in another Linking Words
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problems
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a lot of communities live with that Linking Words
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, smart and developed Linking Words
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, they have to love their Linking Words
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is the most important point for do not go to another Linking Words
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their white-collar workers. Use synonyms
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, managers of smart Linking Words
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give good education and facility systems to their public. Use synonyms
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, their smart students and workers can do and find everything. The public does not need to move to other Linking Words
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, Turkey is not governed by science which is why Turkey could not develop a Linking Words
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that, in spite of Turkey having rich resources, could not develop.
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, as described above; to find an explanation for the problem, the public has to know who is better than them and who has the ability to govern they should choose to do it, not Linking Words
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