The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates that In 2010, the
percentage
of males and females on 6 different age
scales did regular physical exercises.
In terms of gender, the percentage
of women between the ages of 15 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44 and 45 to 54 increases steadily (47.7 % , 48.9% , 52.5% and 53.3 % respectively ) and starts to decrease after the age
of 54. On the other hand
, in men, there is a regular decrease in percentage
between the ages of 15 to 24, 25 to 34, and 35 to 44, (52.8 % , 42.2% , 39.5% respectively) then
it starts to increase and continues regularly.
Overall
, the number of women who did regular physical activity was higher than men. The only time scale in which males’ percentage
was higher than females’ is 15 to 25 ages. (52,8% and 47,7% respectively) The highest percentage
belongs to females whose age
is between 45 to 54 ( 53.3%) and the lowest percentage
belongs to males whose age
is between 35 to 44 ( 39.5%).Submitted by asik.melliss on
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