Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at

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. Others say

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is the only way to save

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traditions. In my opinion, both of the above opinions are partly correct. Nowadays, using traditional cultures as a way to attract

tourists

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is right, using

heritage

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as a tourist attraction to make money is to promote the image of

VietNam

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culture to international friends and

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to the country’s economic development.

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, money collected from

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will contribute to a fund

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to repair and preserve long-standing and gradually disappearing cultural

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.

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, tangible cultural

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such

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as pagodas,

ancient

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architectural

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will be repaired and maintained to avoid damage,

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intangible cultural

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as making pottery, singing will be preserved by artisans and localities without worrying about economics or income because the state will create full subsidies for local communities to support the preservation of

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But

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has some negative effects. Some current

cultural

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cultures

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have been changed from the original to meet the curiosity of the audience.

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, traditional folk songs and dance performances

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to be more attractive to foreign

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instead

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of retaining their original form and meaning.

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, focusing and appreciating only profits earned will cause these traditional

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to overshadow their value and lose true meaning.

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, some

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sites now arbitrarily increase entrance prices

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public

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publics

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public

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services

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as

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dining

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dinning

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and shopping, which

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leaves bad thought for

tourists

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, they will not want to come back,

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mean that not only will the country’s economic resources be affected, but it will

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leave a bad image in the eyes of international friends In conclusion, both of the above opinions have positive and negative aspects.