Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at

tourists

. Others say

this

is the only way to save

such

traditions. In my opinion, both of the above opinions are partly correct. Nowadays, using traditional cultures as a way to attract

tourists

is right, using

heritage

as a tourist attraction to make money is to promote the image of

VietNam

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Vietnamese

culture to international friends and

contributing

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to the country’s economic development.

In addition

, money collected from

tourists

will contribute to a fund

of

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to repair and preserve long-standing and gradually disappearing cultural

heritage

.

For example

, tangible cultural

heritage

such

as pagodas,

ancient

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and ancient

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architectural

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architecture

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will be repaired and maintained to avoid damage,

while

intangible cultural

heritage

as making pottery, singing will be preserved by artisans and localities without worrying about economics or income because the state will create full subsidies for local communities to support the preservation of

heritage

But

this

also

has some negative effects. Some current

cultural

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cultures

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have been changed from the original to meet the curiosity of the audience.

For example

, traditional folk songs and dance performances

are change

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to be more attractive to foreign

tourists

instead

of retaining their original form and meaning.

Furthermore

, focusing and appreciating only profits earned will cause these traditional

heritage

to overshadow their value and lose true meaning.

Beside

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, some

heritage

sites now arbitrarily increase entrance prices

as well as

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public

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publics

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public

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services

such

as

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dining

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dinning

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and shopping, which

also

leaves bad thought for

tourists

, they will not want to come back,

this

mean that not only will the country’s economic resources be affected, but it will

also

leave a bad image in the eyes of international friends In conclusion, both of the above opinions have positive and negative aspects.