The diagram shows the process of electricity production through Ocean Thermal Energy Conversation (OTEC).

The diagram shows the process of electricity production through Ocean Thermal Energy Conversation (OTEC).
The given picture demonstrates the production of electricity through Ocean Thermal Energy Conversation (OTEC).
Overall
, the process seems fairly simple because it includes only a few steps and these steps involve two crucial processes
such
as evaporation and condensation. The surface ocean
water
is warm at 29 degrees Celsius and 1000m inside the ocean,
water
is cold at 5 degrees Celsius.
To begin
with, as the surface
water
is exposed to the sun,
water
gets converted to
water
vapour
which is
then
passed to the Evacuated evaporation
chamber
. In
this
chamber
, salt and
water
vapour
are separated.
After
this
, saltless
water
vapour
obtained from the container rotates the turbine, generating electrical energy. To add on, salt from the previous
chamber
and the
water
vapour
from the turbine is now sent to another container called the Condensing
chamber
.
Also
, the cold seawater which is 1000m from the surface is
also
pushed into
this
chamber
.
Finally
,
Water
vapour
is condensed inside
this
chamber
to produce pure drinking
water
and Waste salt
water
is
also
released
at the end
of the process.
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