**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**
The bar graph illustrates the amount of outlay and outcome of US citizens by different age groups in 2013.
Overall
, middle age
groups had the biggest proportion of Add a hyphen
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values
generally
higher than expenditures for all age categories.
The group of below-25-year-old citizens had just below 30000 Add a missing verb
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dollars
value income which was slightly lower than their outcome. However
, the elderly who were older than 75 years old had roughly equal revenues and expenditures which was around 35000 dollars
.
The remaining populations had quite similar patterns 35-44 year-old
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44-year-old
54 year-old
people had the biggest income with below 80-thousand Add a hyphen
54-year-old
dollars
, on the other hand
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60-thousand
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60 thousand
dollars
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