**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**

**The chart below gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by Americans by age range in 2013.**
The bar graph illustrates the amount of outlay and outcome of US citizens by different age groups in 2013.
Overall
,
middle age
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groups had the biggest proportion of
earning
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and spending,
moreover
income
valeus
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values
generally
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higher than expenditures for all age categories. The group of below-25-year-old citizens had just below 30000
dollars
value income which was slightly lower than their outcome.
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, the elderly who were older than 75 years old had roughly equal revenues and expenditures which was around 35000
dollars
. The remaining populations had quite similar patterns 35-
44 year-old
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and 45-
54 year-old
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people had the biggest income with below 80-thousand
dollars
,
on the other hand
,
second
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group of people's spending
slightly
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was slightly
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higher which was more than
60-thousand
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60 thousand
dollars
.
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