Considering that adults spend much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees?

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. Most people will argue that having job satisfaction is hugely important for many aspects of a harmonious
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satisfaction and why
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not always easy to gain. First of all many businesses look after their employees in a good manner. Employers know that
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and profit of the company depend on workers mostly,
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is why Some companies
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a healthy atmosphere by setting up resting rooms, a good
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equipped
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dining rooms,
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