The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.

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The two given picture show the layout of the Islip town centre at present and

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shows its future construction plan.

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, it can be seen that major changes will take place

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the plan. currently, the north part of the town consists of the countryside and the south part has housing facilities. In the middle of the center is the main pathway which has two divisions one leads to the school and the other on the southeast leads to the park. Either side of the main road incorporates the shops.

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, enormous changes have been planned for the future town centre. Only the position of the park, school and shops towards the south will remain the same. The main driveway will be replaced by a dual-carriageway. towards the, north the shops and housing will

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over by the bus station, shopping centre car park, and new housing facilities towards the northeast side. In the

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middle the road for pedestrians will be constructed.

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, housing will be shifted towards the west and southeast area and some new housing will be placed in the east part.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

187 words

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The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.

People are living much longer than before, and this creates enormous pressure on government services. What are some of the effects of a much larger, older population and what can governments do to deal with this problem?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words. Write about the following topic: The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

some people believe the best way to tackle pollution is by paying tax others disagree. discuss both views and state your opinion

Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?