The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide the percentage of using
water
for different purposes in six areas around the world.
Overall
, according to
the given information, Europe is the country uses
Correct pronoun usage
that uses
water
most in industrial
field, it takes 53%. Add an article
the industrial
About
agricultural use, Central Change preposition
Regarding
Asia
has the largest proportion of water
, accounting for 88%. And South America is the country uses
Correct pronoun usage
that uses
water
for domestic filed
most, it takes 19%.
First of all, there are four countries Correct your spelling
fields
have
Correct pronoun usage
that have
the
large percentage of using Correct article usage
a
water
for agricultural
Add an article
the agricultural
an agricultural
field
, they occupy more than 50%. They are South America, South East Fix the agreement mistake
fields
Asia
, Africa, Central
Correct word choice
and Central
Asia
, 71%, 81%, 84% and 88% respectively.
Moreover
, all of these six areas have less than 20% of domestic use. South America has the largest proportion in this
field which is 19% and Central Asia
has the least apply same as South East Asia
(7%).
Finally
, in South East Asia
, 12% of water
is utilized for industrial uses, while
in Africa and Central Asia
only 7% and 5% of Add a comma
,Asia
water
are put to use for industrial purposes.Submitted by chauhongngoc.577 on
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