The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.

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The maps illustrate plans for changes to the small town of Islip and how it looks now.

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, the main

road

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is going to cross around the city centre and it will have a dual carriageway. The place where it stays now will become a pedestrian zone only. Shops under the main

road

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and school wouldn't change their places. The shops which are north of the main

road

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will be transformed into a few new places. The new

surround

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will include a Bus station, a Shopping centre and a car park. And it will be a tiny

road

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to the new housing from the east part of the main

road

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. The Park zone will become smaller,

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new housing built on the west side of the park. There is no more place for the countryside in the town centre.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

140 words

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infrastructure
residential
commercial
pedestrianization
relocation
sustainability
urban planning
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civic amenities
public transport options
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The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.

Due to the influence of world-wide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is narrowing. The introduction of this global culture is of great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this point of view?

Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

✅ Q: One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?