The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.

The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate plans for changes to the small town of Islip and how it looks now.
Overall
, the main
road
is going to cross around the city centre and it will have a dual carriageway. The place where it stays now will become a pedestrian zone only. Shops under the main
road
and school wouldn't change their places. The shops which are north of the main
road
will be transformed into a few new places. The new
surround
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will include a Bus station, a Shopping centre and a car park. And it will be a tiny
road
to the new housing from the east part of the main
road
. The Park zone will become smaller,
due to
new housing built on the west side of the park. There is no more place for the countryside in the town centre.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • commercial
  • pedestrianization
  • relocation
  • sustainability
  • urban planning
  • land use
  • green spaces
  • civic amenities
  • public transport options
  • commute
  • zoning
  • traffic congestion
  • redevelopment
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