The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015.
The
linegraph
illustrates Correct your spelling
line graph
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
households
with electronic devices from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
, the
mobile Correct article usage
apply
phone
and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
computer
reached Fix the agreement mistake
computers
to
the top of the Change preposition
apply
linegraph
as Correct your spelling
line graph
households
with electronics
devices tallest. And lower is mp3 player and tablet
In 1995 the number of Replace the word
electronic
mp3
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MP3
player
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players
was start
below 20%, over 20 years the Change the verb form
started
percent
of Replace the word
percentage
households
fall
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fell
over
40% in 2015. Change preposition
to over
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the table start
at 0% and Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
reach
the highest point of over 80% in 2015.
At the same time, the mobile Correct subject-verb agreement
reaches
phone
and computer is
two percentage Change the verb form
are
households
tallest in 1995 to 2015, the mobile phone
at
1995 to 2000 started at 8% increase Change preposition
in
gruadually
about 70% electronic devices and Correct your spelling
gradually
reach
a peak at over 90% and hit Wrong verb form
reached
to
Change preposition
apply
the
top spot. The computer Correct article usage
a
also
start
at 8% and Change the verb form
starts
increase
steadily over the 20-year period. In 2015, it peaked at 90%, which is equal to mobile Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
phone
.Fix the agreement mistake
phones
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