Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate?

Some people trust that the first concern of the

government

should be to ensure a growing economy.

However

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others believe that the

government

wants to focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate. In

this

essay, I will discuss

the

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both views and explain

it

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.

Firstly

, the

government

is focusing more on export sales and they need some changes in rules. To explain it,

the

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few points impact the country's growth when buying and selling

the

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products

with another country.

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BBC News, they both play major roles in country growth when buying is increased

then

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down and selling is increased

then

growth is up.

Thus

, the

government

more focus on how to

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the sale of export

products

and encourage all the industries that

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the product in our nation and

also

support

in

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loan facilities, giving

the

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some benefits in taxes.

Secondly

, if the

government

supports small industries

then

it is

also

beneficial for them and

also

for

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public. All the

products

are easily available in the market at low prices and

chance

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a chance

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to create new jobs is more.

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, as per

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of The Times of India, thousands of

startup

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have closed in the

last

few years

due to

high rates of interest on loans and taxes on manufacturing costs. The

government

is giving some relaxation on the starting years for companies in taxes and

also

providing

the

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loans at a low rate of interest. In conclusion, the

government

is encouraging

to

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industries to make new

products

at home so that they do not other countries and

also

support new

startup

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and easily provide the loans at a low rate of interest or some relaxation in tax in the starting years.