The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
number
of people
in Washington
,Columbia
and Yamhill
in the U.S.state
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U.S. state
origin
from 1940 to 2000. Capitalize word
Origin
Overall
, we can notice that the Population
of Washington
was the highest, however
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,however
population
of Columbia
was the lowest over the period.
If we compare between
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apply
number
of people
in Washington
and the number
of people
in Columbia
in 2000 , we can notice that the number
of people
in Washington
was more than the number
of people
in Columbia
. For example
, the number
of people
in Washington
was at over240
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over 240
thousands
, Change to singular
thousand
while
the number
of people
in Columbia
was at around 75 thousands
. It can be deduced from the line graph that the peak of Change to singular
thousand
the
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apply
Washington
was in 1970 at over240
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over 240
thousands
. It is interesting to notice that the Change to singular
thousand
number
of people
in Yamhill
and the number
of people
in Columbia
started from the same point at
1940 at around 30 Change preposition
in
thousands
. Comparing Change to singular
thousand
between
the Change preposition
apply
number
of people
in Yamhill
and the number
of people
in Columbia
from 1940 to 1970,it can be seen that the population
of Columbia
and Yamhill
kept increasing . For instance
, the of
Change preposition
apply
population
of Columbia
was at around 20 thousands
and reached at over 30 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
, Change to singular
thousand
however
the Add a comma
,however
population
of Yamhill
was at over30
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over 30
thousands
and reached at around 45 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
.
In conclusion, after many minor fluctuations,the Change to singular
thousand
population
of Washington
was higher than the population
of Columbia
throughout the whole time farme
.Correct your spelling
frame
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, washington, columbia, yamhill, population, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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