The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Washington
,Use synonyms
Columbia
and Use synonyms
Yamhill
in the Use synonyms
U.S.state
of Correct your spelling
U.S. state
origin
from 1940 to 2000. Capitalize word
Origin
Overall
, we can notice that the Linking Words
Population
of Use synonyms
Washington
was the highest, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
the Add a comma
,however
population
of Use synonyms
Columbia
was the lowest over the period.
If we compare Use synonyms
between
the Change preposition
apply
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Washington
and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Columbia
in 2000 , we can notice that the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Washington
was more than the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Columbia
. Use synonyms
For example
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Washington
was at Use synonyms
over240
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over 240
Use synonyms
thousands
, Change to singular
thousand
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Columbia
was at around 75 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
thousands
. It can be deduced from the line graph that the peak of Change to singular
thousand
the
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apply
Washington
was in 1970 at Use synonyms
over240
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over 240
Use synonyms
thousands
. It is interesting to notice that the Change to singular
thousand
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Yamhill
and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Columbia
started from the same point Use synonyms
at
1940 at around 30 Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
thousands
. Comparing Change to singular
thousand
between
the Change preposition
apply
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Yamhill
and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Columbia
from 1940 to 1970,it can be seen that the Use synonyms
population
of Use synonyms
Columbia
and Use synonyms
Yamhill
kept increasing . Use synonyms
For instance
, the Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
population
of Use synonyms
Columbia
was at around 20 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
thousands
and reached at over 30 Change to singular
thousand
Use synonyms
thousands
, Change to singular
thousand
Linking Words
however
the Add a comma
,however
population
of Use synonyms
Yamhill
was at Use synonyms
over30
Correct your spelling
over 30
Use synonyms
thousands
and reached at around 45 Change to singular
thousand
Use synonyms
thousands
.
In conclusion, after many minor fluctuations,the Change to singular
thousand
population
of Use synonyms
Washington
was higher than the Use synonyms
population
of Use synonyms
Columbia
throughout the whole time Use synonyms
farme
.Correct your spelling
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