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The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the
number
 of
people
 in
Washington
,
Columbia
 and
Yamhill
 in the
U.S.state
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U.S. state
 of
origin
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Origin
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 from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
, we can notice that the
Population
 of
Washington
 was the highest,
however
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,however
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 the
population
 of
Columbia
 was the lowest over the period. If we compare
between
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the
number
 of
people
 in
Washington
 and the
number
 of
people
 in
Columbia
 in 2000 , we can notice that the
number
 of
people
 in
Washington
 was more than the
number
 of
people
 in
Columbia
.
For example
, the
number
 of
people
 in
Washington
 was at
over240
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over 240
thousands
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thousand
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,
while
 the
number
 of
people
 in
Columbia
 was at around 75
thousands
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thousand
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. It can be deduced from the line graph that the peak of
the
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Washington
 was in 1970 at
over240
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over 240
thousands
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thousand
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. It is interesting to notice that the
number
 of
people
 in
Yamhill
 and the
number
 of
people
 in
Columbia
 started from the same point
at
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in
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 1940 at around 30
thousands
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thousand
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. Comparing
between
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the
number
 of
people
 in
Yamhill
 and the
number
 of
people
 in
Columbia
 from 1940 to 1970,it can be seen that the
population
 of
Columbia
 and
Yamhill
 kept increasing .
For instance
, the
of
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population
 of
Columbia
 was at around 20
thousands
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thousand
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 and reached at over 30
thousands
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thousand
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,
however
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,however
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 the
population
 of
Yamhill
 was at
over30
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over 30
thousands
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thousand
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 and reached at around 45
thousands
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thousand
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. In conclusion, after many minor fluctuations,the
population
 of
Washington
 was higher than the
population
 of
Columbia
 throughout the whole time
farme
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frame
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, washington, columbia, yamhill, population, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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