The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overwight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, the total amount of individuals who are in trouble because of obesity is increasing. In
this
essay, I will explore the causes of Linking Words
this
unhealthy problem, and share possible solutions. Linking Words
Firstly
, I will consider to results of fast-food culture and irregular eating Linking Words
habits
, and Use synonyms
secondly
, I will explain how governments and Linking Words
sports
clubs decrease the number of Use synonyms
this
issue.
First of all, in Linking Words
this
modern world, people do not have adequate time to cook healthy meals because of Linking Words
being
tired after their long working hours. Wrong verb form
are
As a result
, they prefer to order foods which are fast food. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
eating
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the eating
habits
of folks’ are changing, and they are evolving Use synonyms
to
irregular types. These situations cause Change preposition
into
the
obesity and being overweight. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, Linking Words
according to
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the
some studies, fast-food culture has been changing the society’s eating Remove the article
apply
habits
day-to-day, and it has been resulting Use synonyms
some
overweight problems.
A viable solution for Change preposition
in some
this
issue would be thatLinking Words
,
the governments should decline the taxes Remove the comma
apply
of
healthy products which are from green foods to Change preposition
on
minimum
or zero. Correct article usage
a minimum
Therefore
, manufacturers can produce more healthy foods for Linking Words
public
. Add an article
the public
Moreover
, some Linking Words
sports
clubs should encourage to play Use synonyms
sports
via some competitions which prize the winner and every participant. Use synonyms
For example
, a Linking Words
sports
club in my city Ankara organises a running competition every year, and it can be clearly seen from their database that, the number of overweight people in Ankara has been decreasing Use synonyms
due to
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this
competition.
In conclusion, there are some issues, Linking Words
such
as fast-food culture and irregular eating Linking Words
habits
, that cause Use synonyms
the
obesity. Felling taxes for healthy meals and encouraging people to Correct article usage
apply
sports
may be possible solutions for Use synonyms
this
problem.Linking Words
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