Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

In the

last

few years, increasing numbers of people have been seeking their jobs.

As a result

, the older individuals are in

competion

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competition

with the younger to get the recruiters convinced and

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them to have an appropriate position in the company.

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essay will discuss some major problems and it will analyse how

this

issue can be solved. On the one hand, one of the major issues should come down to modern

labor

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recruitment trends. Obviously, most of the younger applicants,

who

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are favoured by

the

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employers not only because they have keen

intelligience

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intelligence

in dealing with new problems but

also

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potential to be well-trained and eventually become rich in experience

soon

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in the future. Another serious problem is that the economy is

constanly

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constantly

developing.

For instance

,businesses associated with technology need to periodically change their recruiting criteria with more demands required.

However

, there are solutions for

this

problem which include

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to

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balancing the

jobs

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demand and

jobs

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supply

through

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by

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expanding the field of traditional occupation which will efficiently

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the

unemployed

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rate.

Moreover

,a policy must be

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to encourage the company to employ more old people. It is

also

important to ensure

the

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older people

to

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catch up

the

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with the

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younger by training them

the

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with the

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skills needed and

also

an

aware

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with

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new problems. In conclusion, the main issue with competition for work is the older one

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not

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have competitive advantages in

comparision

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comparison

with the

younger

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oneyounger

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. Despite

this

,

fully

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training and intervention of the government in the economy can improve the equality between them.