The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services-to the UK economy in the twentieth cenutury. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following graph depicts three main fields that influenced the

economy

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of the UK in

twentieth

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the twentieth

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century in percentages. Those fields include

agriculture

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, manufacturing,

business

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and

finance

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.

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, in the first half of the 20th

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agriculture

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played a huge role in the

economy

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of the UK, unlike

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the second half because

business

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and

finance

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became more important during that period of time. We can observe

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a downward

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trend in

agriculture

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and manufacturing, and

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an upward

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trend in the influence of

business

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and financial

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.

Agriculture

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made up almost 50%,

manufactoring aroung

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manufacturing around

45%, and

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the contribution

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of

finance

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and

business

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was less than 10% of the

economy

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of the UK, in 1900. From 1950 until 1975,

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the impact

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of each of these

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except

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manufacturing increased. Manufacturing made up less than 40% of the

economy

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.

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, the

conribution

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contribution

of

agriculture

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made up more than 60%, and

finance

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and

business

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made up almost 10% of the

economy

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. In 1975, the influence of both

agriculture

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and manufacturing

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decreased, they made up almost 10% and more than 30%, respectively. The contribution of

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business

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the business

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and financial

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kept increasing,

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they

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made up approximately 20 of the

economy

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.

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in

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2000,

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the impact

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of

agriculture

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and manufacturing continued decreasing,

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they

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made up less

10

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than 10

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% and around 15%, respectively. But the contribution of the

business

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and financial

sectors

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increased dramatically, it made up around 40% of the

economy

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.