The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above diagram illustrates the
process
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of making a
violin
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by hand. The
process
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starts from scratch and delivers us the final product [
violin
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]. The
process
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of making a
violin
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involves 9 main steps. All these steps
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man power
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and
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not require the help of machines. Each step requires different materials and
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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to arrive at the final product.
Thin
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A thin
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piece of wood is taken and
cutted
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in
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the shape
violen
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violent
viola
(body of
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violin
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the violin
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)
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the back
part
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and the
front
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part
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which
was
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cutted
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in the previous step
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coated and polished.
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with the help of a cutting tool, f-hole is cut in the
front
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part
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. In the next stage bass bar is glued to the
front
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part
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of the
violin
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. The unshaped rib strips are shaped with the help of
heating
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the heating
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tool.
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the
front
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part
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, ribs and back
part
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are glued together. The neck with the scroll is connected to the body of the body of the
violin
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. The assembled
violin
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is polished with varnish, and additional parts are added.
This
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completes the
process
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of making, a
violin
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. Now the completed
violin
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can be tuned and played.
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