The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above diagram illustrates the
process
of making a violin
by hand. The process
starts from scratch and delivers us the final product [ violin
].
The process
of making a violin
involves 9 main steps. All these steps uses
Change the verb form
use
man power
and Correct your spelling
manpower
does
not require the help of machines. Each step requires different materials and Change the verb form
do
equipments
to arrive at the final product.
Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Thin
piece of wood is taken and Add an article
A thin
The thin
cutted
Correct your spelling
cut
in
the shape Change preposition
into
violen
(body of Correct your spelling
violent
viola
violin
) Correct article usage
the violin
Then
the back part
and the front
part
which was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cutted
in the previous step Correct your spelling
cut
is
coated and polished. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Then
with the help of a cutting tool, f-hole is cut in the front
part
. In the next stage bass bar is glued to the front
part
of the violin
.
The unshaped rib strips are shaped with the help of heating
tool. Add an article
the heating
a heating
Then
the front
part
, ribs and back part
are glued together. The neck with the scroll is connected to the body of the body of the violin
. The assembled violin
is polished with varnish, and additional parts are added. This
completes the process
of making, a violin
. Now the completed violin
can be tuned and played.Submitted by insighttribez on
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