Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these method are ineffective, and at worst that may be dangerous. To what extent did you agree with this statement.

There has been a discussion around the new
forms
of
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medicine
and whether to use it in hospitals or totally forbid doctors from putting it into work. I strongly believe we should not trust the alternative
forms
when it comes to the lives of human beings.
Although
science is proven to be inconsistent and not permanent, it is sufficient to save lives and
that is
enough for me to defend it against the superstition that we call alternative
medicine
.
Firstly
, what is not science we cannot know for a fact that they work. The physicians who have not studied
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real
medicine
in a university, often are salesmen who want their products to replace the usual drugs.
Moreover
, their desire for money costs a lot of people their money.
For example
, there was a traditional doctor working near my house who got arrested after 20 years of practice. Not surprisingly, he was condemned for fraud
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going to be locked up for 30 years.
Thus
, the number of people who take advantage of our superstitions is rising
due to
the great benefit that lies in
this
industry.
Secondly
, they will most likely cause harm to our health. The moment you start to take approved medication and act based on non-ordinary medical instructions, you are delaying the real medication you really need and
therefore
, your disease might advance and become more dangerous.
Furthermore
, the social effects of believing in non-science practices are devastating as fewer folk will actually believe their doctors and choose secondary
forms
of healing.
For instance
, in a house where the parents are superstitious, the youth won't understand the essence of
medicine
and
then
, they are more likely to avoid seeing an actual physician.
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,
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fake doctors are more likely to kill patients just by delaying their effective treatment and prescribing
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medication.
To conclude
, in the argument between the believers of scientific
medicine
and other
forms
of it, I believe we cannot trust anything other than
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ordinary healing, not until the other shapes of treatments are scientifically proven to be harmless and indeed, effectively
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humans.
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