the charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
These pie charts illustrate the proportion of the
energy
made from six sources in a country in 1985 and 2003.
Overall
, the main energy
resource was oil in both 1985 and 2003 and it produced half a percentage of energy
in 1985.
According to
the pie charts, the main energy
source was oil and it produced 52% and 39% in 1985 and 2003 respectively. Moreover
, natural gas and coal produced energy
at 13% and 8% in 1985. However
, it increased by 23 percent
and 22 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively in 2003.
The nuclear source was the second lead in 1985 and 22%. Somehow it has decreased to 8% in 2003. The hydro resource produced the same proportion of Change the spelling
per cent
energy
in both 1985 and 2003 about 4%. The energy
production from other renewable sources increased from 1% to 4% in 2003.Submitted by savithra on
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