The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of humans who were born in and outside Australia extending to urban , rural and towns from 1995 to 2010 .
According to
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the data , the most of people who were born in Australia between 1995 and 2010 , mostly were born in cities
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the percentage with nearly 65 % . Towns take the
last
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places , 20 % in 1995 and less than 20 % 15 years later . The same tendency in rural areas decreased twice since the beginning approximately 30 % to 15 % .
On the other hand
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, the percentage of people who were born outside Australia in the first decade of the 21st century was the same as in the mid-90s and
this
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number is 80 % . The number of births in towns fell nearly 5 % ( 25 to 20 ) and
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dramatically increased observed in rural areas 40 % to 5 % in 15 years .
Overall
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the comparison , is that most births are located in cities which are not distinguishable from countries and minorities are in rural areas .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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