In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Population growth in the

cities

and megalopolises has become one of the widely discussed issues nowadays. Rustic

people

leave their homes and go to

cities

in some of the

countries

, and

due to

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community in the rural areas is reducing.

Countries

without rural

population

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populations

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and

culture

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cultures

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cannot have good economic development and provide adequate services only in the

cities

. It can be understandable that food, textile and cultural places are located in the rural regions which have become an essential part of our

life

.

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examination of the development and the factors responsible for

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worldwide economics will be discussed. One of the main causes of movement to

cities

is undeveloped economies and poor infrastructures. It is the result of the only government control over the

cities

initially

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and after that regions. The most important

seems

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the

life

of the rural

people

and their social welfare,

nevertheless

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they cannot study, receive a high education and work in

highly-paid

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positions.

People

are moving to developed areas

due to

that,

such

as educational opportunities, employment and social services. Namely, a high school graduate who

live

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in

rural

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a rural

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part of Armenia, will move to Yerevan and qualify

their

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education, used in their later

life

. Basically, they will need to stay somewhere and work for their own outcomes.

On the other hand

, if everyone from those states

arrive

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in the

cities

,

then

the

cities

cannot supply

with

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enough electricity, water and gas to everyone.

Cities

will become crowded and native residents will lose their jobs and why not their identity.

Consequently

, all rural workplaces, fabrics and factories will be closed and destroyed.

Moreover

,

countries

economically will

get

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ruined ,

similarly

, food and fabric supplies will reduce in high demand.

For instance

, many factories,

facilities

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will be closed soon if that trend grows and

people

who live in Perm, Russia will leave their homes

due to

jobless

life

.(unemployment) Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to a conclusion that the development is negative. So it would not be surprising to see some deserted (abandoned)parts of the

countries

in the near future.

However

, administrations of rural states can solve those problems, providing their citizens with infrastructure solutions , health care needs, education systems and other unsatisfied social problems that can lead to a tremendous number of jobs, resources and social mobility.