In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Population growth in the

cities

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and megalopolises has become one of the widely discussed issues nowadays. Rustic

people

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leave their homes and go to

cities

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in some of the

countries

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, and

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fact

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community in the rural areas is reducing.

Countries

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without rural

population

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populations

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and

culture

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cultures

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cannot have good economic development and provide adequate services only in the

cities

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. It can be understandable that food, textile and cultural places are located in the rural regions which have become an essential part of our

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.

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examination of the development and the factors responsible for

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worldwide economics will be discussed. One of the main causes of movement to

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is undeveloped economies and poor infrastructures. It is the result of the only government control over the

cities

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and after that regions. The most important

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the

life

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of the rural

people

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and their social welfare,

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they cannot study, receive a high education and work in

highly-paid

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positions.

People

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are moving to developed areas

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that,

such

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as educational opportunities, employment and social services. Namely, a high school graduate who

live

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in

rural

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a rural

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part of Armenia, will move to Yerevan and qualify

their

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education, used in their later

life

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. Basically, they will need to stay somewhere and work for their own outcomes.

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, if everyone from those states

arrive

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in the

cities

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,

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the

cities

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cannot supply

with

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enough electricity, water and gas to everyone.

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will become crowded and native residents will lose their jobs and why not their identity.

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, all rural workplaces, fabrics and factories will be closed and destroyed.

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,

countries

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economically will

get

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ruined ,

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, food and fabric supplies will reduce in high demand.

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, many factories,

facilities

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will be closed soon if that trend grows and

people

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who live in Perm, Russia will leave their homes

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jobless

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.(unemployment) Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to a conclusion that the development is negative. So it would not be surprising to see some deserted (abandoned)parts of the

countries

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in the near future.

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, administrations of rural states can solve those problems, providing their citizens with infrastructure solutions , health care needs, education systems and other unsatisfied social problems that can lead to a tremendous number of jobs, resources and social mobility.