The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The graph below shows the percentage change

in the number of international students

graduating from universities in different

Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
the graph below presents information relating to statistics on the percentage of international students in different Canadian universities in 2001 and 2006
Overall
all of the schools rose after 5
years
starting in 2001. And New Brunswick was the highest with 7% in 2001 and 12% in 2006
while
Ontario was the lowest
To begin
Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador universities were the same in both two
years
with 3.5% in 2001 and 6.5% in 2006. Ontario was lower with 3% in 2001 and 6% after 5
years
. The proportion of Alberta was 4.9%
while
the figure for British Columbia was slightly lower, at 4.8%. But in 2006, British Columbia outweighed Alberta with 10.5%.
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while
, Alberta was only 7.5%. Nova Scotia was 6.5% and Quebec chased close with 6% in 2001. after 5
years
, two schools had longer distances with 10.5% in Nova Scotia and 8% in Quebec schools.
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