the charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

the charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The display chart
show
Change the verb form
shows
show examples
the proportion of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
energy produced from different sources in
the a
Choose an article
the
a
show examples
country between 1985 and 2003. The data contain
oil
,
nature
Replace the word
natural
show examples
gas
, coal, nuclear,
hydro
and other renewable. The changes in the proportion of the energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. In the year 1985,
oil
is 1%, coal is 4%, natural
gas
is 22%, nuclear is 8%,
hydro
is 13% and other renewable is 52%. In the year 2003,
oil
is 4%, natural
gas
is 4%, coal is 8%, nuclear is 22%,
hydro
is 23% and other renewable is 39%. There are 6 types of sources in a country. The information is from 1985 and 2003.
To conclude
, the above information describes the percentage of
oil
, natural
gas
, nuclear,
hydro
as well
as
Correct word choice
and
show examples
other renewable. The energy produced from different resources in a nation in 1985 and 2003.
Submitted by purvaam383 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, gas, hydro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: