The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of contributions made by agriculture, industry, and services sectors to the Indian financial system between 1960 and 2000.
It is clear that
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the importance of agriculture has decreased steadily
while
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services had a dramatic growth decade by decade. Meanwhile, the industry experienced a slow increase but
then
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it commenced to go down from 1980 onwards. In 1960, agriculture contributed by far the highest of India's GDP, peaking at 62 %, but
then
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it reduced continuously to a low of 13% by the year 2000.
In contrast
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, the services sector played a minor role in domestic products.
This
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Station gradually changed and
this
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sector's contribution boomed from 23% to 62% between 1970 to 2000.
Therefore
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, industry remained a steady contributor to India's economy through the 40-year period. Better 1960 and 1980 it saw a 10% increase
then
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remained static from 1980 to 2000, preserving consistent a share of
Overall
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GDP.
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