The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of 

families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table reveals the count of distinct
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families who spent their life under poor financial conditions in the year 1999.
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of aged couples was
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among all households whether it was totally opposite for the sole parents.
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single aged
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with no children
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poverty line. In the year 1999, 7 per cent of partners without children suffered from
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  • proportion
  • categories
  • families
  • poverty
  • single-parent
  • childcare
  • income
  • couples
  • dependents
  • older adults
  • pensions
  • unemployed
  • financial resources
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