Task 1 The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Task 1

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
This
report derives from the line graph, which illustrates the
number
of travelling to and from the United Kingdom (
UK
) between 1979 and 1999, and the bar graph, which illustrates the states which were preferred most by
British
individuals in 1999. A good starting point would be to say that, the total amount of visits to and from the
UK
increased significantly over the years shown. Meanwhile, France was the most popular choice for holiday for
UK
citizens. The first result worth pointing out is that
,
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the
number
of
British
natives who visited different countries doubled between 1979 and the
endings
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of
1980s
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– which was more than 10
million
slightly in 1979. In the following years, the
amount
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of tourists who were
British
experienced a considerable increase; it started
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nearly 20
million
people
in around 1986, and it finished the competition with approximately 53
million
individuals in 1999.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
people
who went to the
UK
was nearly 10
million
and approximately 30
million
in 1979 and 1999, respectively. Another piece of information that can be observed is that
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France, which was preferred by more than 10
million
British
people
in 1999, led the pack
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competition of choices.
Then
, Spain followed France’s placement with approximately 10
million
, whilst the
number
of
the
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people
, who were from the
UK
and went to the United States of America (USA), Greece and Turkey, was approximately 4
million
people
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, uk, british, million, people with synonyms.
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