Task 1 The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
This
report derives from the line graph, which illustrates the number
of travelling to and from the United Kingdom (UK
) between 1979 and 1999, and the bar graph, which illustrates the states which were preferred most by British
individuals in 1999.
A good starting point would be to say that, the total amount of visits to and from the UK
increased significantly over the years shown. Meanwhile, France was the most popular choice for holiday for UK
citizens.
The first result worth pointing out is that,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
of British
natives who visited different countries doubled between 1979 and the endings
of Replace the word
end
1980s
– which was more than 10 Correct article usage
the 1980s
million
slightly in 1979. In the following years, the amount
of tourists who were Change the quantifier
number
British
experienced a considerable increase; it started from
nearly 20 Change preposition
with
million
people
in around 1986, and it finished the competition with approximately 53 million
individuals in 1999. On the other hand
, the number
of people
who went to the UK
was nearly 10 million
and approximately 30 million
in 1979 and 1999, respectively.
Another piece of information that can be observed is that,
France, which was preferred by more than 10 Remove the comma
apply
million
British
people
in 1999, led the pack the
competition of choices. Change preposition
in the
Then
, Spain followed France’s placement with approximately 10 million
, whilst the number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
people
, who were from the UK
and went to the United States of America (USA), Greece and Turkey, was approximately 4 million
people
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