The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant
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, it can be clearly seen that all country’s visitors uplifted from 1.3 to 3.2
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,except China. It can be clearly observed that France was at its peak
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time with 167.7
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visitors,
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the USA had the biggest amount of money from tourists, it is approximately 270 billion dollars.
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the smallest quantity of humans who travel was in Italy,
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the number did not reach 100
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people. ,
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it could be noticed that both countries China and Italy did not exceed in
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of tourists 60
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the sum of these two countries is equal to the budget of one country USA. It is interesting to note that the year 2013
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shows that all countries were uplifted by visitors. It is apparently seen that from the beginning until the end only China declined by 2 per cent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "uplifted" was used 2 times.
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