The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that all country’s visitors uplifted from 1.3 to 3.2 million
,except China.
It can be clearly observed that France was at its peak all
time with 167.7 Change preposition
of all
million
visitors, however
the USA had the biggest amount of money from tourists, it is approximately 270 billion dollars.Add the comma(s)
,however
Whereas
the smallest quantity of humans who travel was in Italy, furthermore
the number did not reach 100 million
people.
,Moreover
it could be noticed that both countries China and Italy did not exceed in Add a comma
,Moreover
number
of tourists 60 Change the article
a number
the number
million
, ,
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apply
furthermore
the sum of these two countries is equal to the budget of one country USA.
It is interesting to note that the year 2013 Add a comma
,furthermore
also
shows that all countries were uplifted by visitors.
It is apparently seen that from the beginning until the end only China declined by 2 per cent.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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