It is said that when recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a debate about whether employers should consider employee's personal

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rather than qualifications and experiences in the recruitment

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. I particularly support

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essay. I believe that qualification is important in the selection of new employees. Workers should have the required qualifications.

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, if the work is related to technical expertise

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as software development, a person should have minimum knowledge of programming. Some of the programming languages are essential for their area of expertise. The same requirements are valid in other departments, and vice versa. Experience is another important criterion for recruiting. Most of the companies prefer to work well experienced candidates.

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, I think that experience is not as important as qualification.

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can be obtained throughout working life.

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, it creates a vicious circle for people who freshly graduated from college.

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, newly graduated people can'

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find a job if the recruiters insist on working with experienced employees.

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, Personal

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as honesty, discipline and reliability are much more important for employee selection. If an employee has these positive

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, he or she will add much more value to the company. The main problem with the recruitment

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for human resources professionals is that these

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be determined or measured easily. Most companies have done some evaluation tests on their candidates,

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, it doesn'

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reflect the certain results of personal behaviours.

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, a reference check is another tool for companies in

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process

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to understand a person's quality, again, it can be manipulated easily. In conclusion, I agree that a personal quality is important when comparing the others.

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be easily determined through the employment

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. There are always open points or grey areas for determination and assessment. I firmly believe that other needs should be considered in the selection

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Provide a clearer introduction and conclusion to frame the essay

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Expand on the personal qualities and their importance in the workplace to strengthen the argument

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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315 words

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