Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

Fully explain your ideas

Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many things that were used to be done at homes by hands are now being done by machines does this advantages or disadvantages

It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

you would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friend in your letter tell your friend about your birthday explain how much the visit would mean to you suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit