You have bought a washing machine. First you found that the machine did not work properly, and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one seriously entangled the clothes. Write to the manager of the company to complain about it. In your letter: - State your reason for writing, - Describe the problems, - Ask the provider to solve the problem

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Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to express

the

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dissatisfaction

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with

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my washing machine which I bought from your shop two days ago. The issue that I

encoutered

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encountered

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was

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that the washing machine was entangled

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with my

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clothes. Today I

am suffer

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for

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from

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not washing my clothes for

working

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work

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. I wish

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apply

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you could sort

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apply

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out

this

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major problem to get me another washing

mechine

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machine

due to

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my need for my family and for work and without

this

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meachine

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machine

whole my family

will

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would

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be sick because they would not be able to wash clothes and bed linen.

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, I would appreciate

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you

can

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could

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help us and that can make my family happy and healthy

for

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using a new washing

meachine

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machine

for the sake of

cleaness

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cleanliness

. Let me know if you have any

question

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regarding the washing

meachine

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machine

. yours', Faithfully, Tokateti Totoki

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

141 words

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