Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Some people argue that it is better for
students
to Replace the word
pursue
pursuit
their Replace the word
pursue
favorite
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favourite
subjects
, while
others believe that students
should learn useful subjects
for their future at universities. Although
, there are good arguments about the second view, I personally
in Add a missing verb
am personally
favor
of Change the spelling
favour
first
view.
On the one hand, in some industrial countries, Change the article
the first
students
who graduated from fields related with
science and technology have a big chance to Change preposition
to
employ
in lucrative jobs. Wrong verb form
be employed
Therefore
, individuals who studied
the mentioned Wrong verb form
study
subjects
compulsory
will have a more convenient life without financial problems. Correct word choice
apply
For instance
, in my country, Iran, parents prefer that their children major in medical fields or engineering because their career will guarantee in the future. Thus
, the majority of the youth in my country have to study subjects
at universities that they may not passionate
aboutAdd a missing verb
be passionate
those
.
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apply
On the other hand
, students
who select their discipline freely are passionate about university courses and activities. Therefore
, the
high level of concentration and enjoyment of reading will Correct article usage
a
associate
with Wrong verb form
be associated
flourishing
of individuals' innovation and creativity. Correct article usage
the flourishing
In addition
, people who are involved in the
jobs related to their Correct article usage
apply
interest
have better performance than others. Fix the agreement mistake
interests
For example
, my wife has really liked art since she was a kid, but, his parents insisted that she must studied
one of the medical fields, Change the verb form
study
thing
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a thing
the thing
which
she Change preposition
in which
never
interestedAdd a missing verb
was never
in
. Unfortunately, she Change preposition
apply
never
successful neither medical nor art.
Add a missing verb
was never
To sum up
, although
a group of people think that it would be better to
youngsters studied in science and technology without Change preposition
for to
right
to choose, I believe that Add an article
the right
students
should select majors based on their favorites
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favourites
,
because it leads to Remove the comma
apply
Correct article usage
the flourish
flourish
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flourishing
their
talents and Change preposition
of their
creativities
.Replace the word
creativity
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