Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

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communications
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, many of them are becoming extinct yearly. Some individuals opine that fewer dialects can lead to
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life for nations. I totally disagree with
this
statement and I think that it has some detrimental effects on societies. On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that language is an important
part
of
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of each generation.
Therefore
, by vanishing every dialect in each region, a significant
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will vanish. As a useful example, Iran is a country with diverse local dialects in its different
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. In the
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Iranian
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to use Persian in order to communicate with their children and others. Unfortunately, by
following
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local music, manners and books will die out in the near future.
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serious
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as so many
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native tongues are disappearing. To explain
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, there are some strange languages in Brazil, Colombia, Russia, Spain, Mexico and other parts of the world that many tourists are very
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to visit
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people who speak in them.
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that accurate
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of
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emotions and feelings is impossible without using their native dialect.
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extinct,
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who speak
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it cannot have a deep connection with non-natives.
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conclusion,
although
a
part
of people claim that life with fewer languages will be easier, I personally believe that tongues are an inseparable
part
of every generation’s culture and we must preserve them obsessively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Endangered languages
  • Homogenization
  • Multilingualism
  • Language preservation
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Global communication
  • Intellectual diversity
  • Ecological knowledge
  • Cultural traditions
  • Communication barriers
  • Preservation efforts
  • Technological solutions
  • Language revival
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